shadow doko

[shadow]

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Full name: shadow edward doko
Alliance: intermedal (wild card)
Rank: jedi
Species: bat
Age: 20
Sex: female
Assignment/Location: is only to find the person she is to kill next.
Born: 1/22/1990
Place of Birth: bat's home world
Parents:
Father ----> kono doko
Mother ----> kada doko
Education: top of class
Marital Status: long bat wings. two light saber one green and one purpel.
love stuff:taken but is haveing a hard time keeping up with her hubby.
Background: when she was still younge she started her training.She soon learned that her old friends where off to other worlds other galexys even.So she desided to start fighting on wich ever side pays more.Her mother and father both died by jedi for some reason they said that her mother and father where part of the dark side.She then grow quite fond of hearing that form her teacher.She soon learnd more of the force and why they had to be killed. As of now she is runing around as a stripper/killer looking for the damm jedi that killed her only hope of liveing.
Quote:'I stay in the shadows'

[Binary the Great]

Alright, first of all, try to keep in mind that the biography is out of character information. If your character doesn't know, that is fine; but the information should still be found in the biography. 'Marital status' refers to the character's love/sex life (IE: is she single, married, widowed, frequent participant of one-night-stands?). 'Quote' is just a request for something that typifies the character; it's purely optional.

Your biography is rather... Choppy. That is to say, there's little chronological order and I find it very confusing to read. It appears to me that your character masquerades as an entertainer for credits whle seeking a number of Jedi thought to be responsible for her parents' deaths (which she doesn't remember). Further, it seems she also kicks ass when paid to.

I'd reccomend sitting down and ironing out the chronology first, then we can look over the finer details.

[shadow]

ok yea i understand thanks. and this is like my first time turning this person into a thing that would fit into this. so yea i'll work it out on a pice of paper tonight.

[Binary the Great]

Another thing you should know: we don't have humans. Simians, yes, but no humans.

[shadow]

come on........i want to be unque (cant spell worth shit when i'm tired)

[Steedo]

There are hundreds and hundreds of animal species you could be and still be unique.

No one has created a ferret or a bat, or a bear, much less more exotic animals like zebra(very good metaphorical value of uniqueness on a zebra), okapi, or koalas... Or anthropomorphise a Starwars animal. No one has made a nerf or gnrt... Even existing Starwars furry races like Gamoreans, shistivarnians, ithorians are wide open. But this is a Furry universe, so you will really need to play some kind of Furry to fit in the universe.

[shadow]

ok hows that one? hope its good.