Darth Terace aka Aran Starr

[jackfox]

Name: Darth Terace (Aran Starr)
Age: 46
Alliance: Empire
Rank: Sith Lord
Species: Couger
Sex: male
Assignment/location: N/A
Born:
Place of Birth: Wayfar Tatooine
Maratal status: maried, I guess ^^;
Parents: unknown
Background: He was a jedi master until the end of the clone wars, when he switched sides and joined Darth Sidius and the Empire. He knows Jack for when Adi was training him, Starr would assist them. but he didn't have those feelings when he and Jack brawled outside Theed. Jack took his left arm, but spared him his life, after that, he has vowed to kill Jack and any of his companions.
Quote: "I vow, by the loss of my arm, that I shall have Revenge! on you Jacklin, and anyone who wishes to acompony you!!!"

***Note: this might be a new villan for my comic***

[Marcus Starkiller]

Very good so far.

[Binary the Great]

*cracks knuckles and streaches* I've been out of this for far too long. Anywho, vivisection shall commence.

First, during the reign of the Empire, only one was granted the title of Sith Lord: Emperor Palpatine. Darth Vader was his apprentice, and the rest were Dark Jedi or something of similar station. Since your character supposedly survived the Clone Wars and the Jedi hunt that followed, odds are he will be a Dark Jedi; this includes the period post-Palpatine when Dark Jedi are most prevalent.

Second, you need to explain why your character defected to the Confederacy. What lead him to sign up with Darth Tyranous and crew? Did Master Bulq convince him to switch sides, or was it some other, traumatic event?

Please understand that I'm not saying you have a bad character; I'm just trying to poke the right parts of your brain to help take the idea and make a great character with it.