Sashee Sensenbrenner

[brainybarker]

Full name: Sashee Sensenbrenner.

Alliance: Jedi

Rank: Padawan

Species: Dog (Golden Retriever)

Age: 6

Sex: Female

Assignment/Location: Currently in training

Born: 5 years before the Clone Wars

Place of Birth: Groznica.

Parents:
Father ----> Rusty Sensenbrenner
Mother ----> Goldee Sensenbrenner

Education: Jedi training

Marital status: none

Background: Sashee is the daughter of the King Rusty and Queen Goldee of Groznica, a planet mostly consisting of Golden Retrievers in the region of Solaurana. When she was 5, Rusty and Goldee died in a coup led by coyotes and jackals, who live in 2 different regions of Groznica (Anubia and Hariyun). The killer of the 2 monarchs was never caught, even though Sashee told authorities that the killer was the Supreme Leader of the coyotes, that he was the only one in the bunch who happened to be a cyborg, and that he had tried to kill her so she couldn't send for help. An advisor to the Solauranan royal family then piloted Sashee to Coriscant so she could become a Jedi and attempt to avenge her parents' deaths. She is currently the padawan of Durann Kajah, a female Rotweiller.

Character notes: Sashee has gold fur with white underbelly. She also wears padawan's robes, wields a blue lightsaber and has green eyes. Her hair is sandy brown with a white streak running down the front (Like Indira Gandhi)

[Marcus Starkiller]

Looks good.

[Binary the Great]

The background is a little short, and I think you should probably consider the motive behind the attempted coup. Also, if these hostiles were able to make it through a number of guards and the parents, what kept them from killing her? Further, why was she not identified as a Jedi much sooner, and taken to train? Why would the Jedi council take her, knowing revenge is the reason for her wanting to become a Jedi?

These are just a few cursory questions, mind you. I think there may be a little potential, but it needs some work.

[brainybarker]

I agree. It does need work. I'm aware that vengeance is a form of anger, and am hoping to make it so she gets over it.

As for the coup, i'll try to come up with a reason the Hariyuans and Anubians wanted to seize Solaurana so bad, as well as try to answer the rest of your questions simply by making some changes to her bio. In the meantime, i need some time to think. I'm not as into Star Wars as you are.