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Post by jackfox on Mar 28, 2007 11:28:35 GMT -5
yes, the battle rages on and infact ends here. ^^ but, as the battle ends, a new story begins. =0  um, I forgot to color Jack's pants and put the talk bubbles showing where they go, so Jack is talking when you don't see where it goes to kk. ^^; |
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Mar 28, 2007 11:38:18 GMT -5
I don't mean to nit-pick, but I see a few minor errors.
A Sith would have battled with a lightsaber, and can use the force just like Jedi do.
Also, a lightsaber would cauterize the wound (no blood, despite what was seen in the cantina scene in A New Hope).
But aside from that, good job. None of my comic experiments have ever gotten close to as far as your comic has gone, so I applaud your work.
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Mar 28, 2007 18:08:51 GMT -5
Yep. The nameless warrior looks to be a Mandalorian, except for the fact that he doesn't have any wrist gauntlets. Other then that, i like it.
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Post by jackfox on Mar 28, 2007 23:10:24 GMT -5
I don't mean to nit-pick, but I see a few minor errors. A Sith would have battled with a lightsaber, and can use the force just like Jedi do. Also, a lightsaber would cauterize the wound (no blood, despite what was seen in the cantina scene in A New Hope). But aside from that, good job. None of my comic experiments have ever gotten close to as far as your comic has gone, so I applaud your work. well, I like blood. and this is an expermint for when I make my real comics. ^^ so yah. as for the "sith" comment, it was like 11 at night and I needed to put somethin' in there. ^^;; but thanks for your concern. appreaciated. ^^ |
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