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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 25, 2005 18:14:52 GMT -5
Tactical Officer Rost: Enemy warships launching fighters! Thousands of them!
A bunch of radio chatter can be heard over the comm system.
Clone pilot 12/145: This as Gold 3, we've lost Gold Le-AAAAGGGGHHHHH! *radio silence*
Clone Commander Krayt: Watch those fighters!
Clone pilot 24/1834: Buzz Droids all over the place... Ripping apart the fighter... They hit life support. Reactor bre--! *ARC-170 explodes*
Master Krai: Echo squadron on m-AAAIIIIIIII! *static*
Tactical Officer Rost: Captain Galnor, our fighters are dropping like flies!
In the midst of the space battle, Master Sunskimmer's Task Force is falling prey to the large ammounts of droid fighters.
Horkon: My starboard engine is hit. Going down!
Zul: Horkon, I'll cover you. Head for the Fire.
Horkon Sunskimmer fights with the controls of his damaged starfighter. The green and chrome Jedi starfighter crashes to the hangerbay deck of the Corellian Fire. The canopy blasts away and Horkon jumps from the craft as it slams into the hangerbay wall. Zul's yellow starfighter lands nearby.
Zul: Are you alright my love?
Horkon: Alittle winded, but I'll live.
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 25, 2005 19:28:56 GMT -5
With many of the previous ships damaged or destroyed, Altessa orders them back to guard her new command ship.
"I'm not letting this one come to harm," she thinks to herself.
Meanwhile, the new ships from both sides exchange fire with one another.
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 26, 2005 12:47:48 GMT -5
ic:
During the battle, one of the Dreadnaught Heavy Cruisers, the God of War explodes. The blast damages two nearby Seperatist warships and destroys the Corellian Support Frigate Courier.
ooc:
here are the current stats for both Republic fleets;
1st Defense Fleet:
3 Loronar Huntress-class Pursuit Cruisers
Grappler (DESTROYED)
Honor
Fury (DESTROYED)
1 Corellian Support Frigate
Sand Panther
1 Republic Judicial Department Battlecruiser
Enforcer (DESTROYED)
8 Republic Troop Carriers
C-1 (DISABLED)
C-2 (DESTROYED)
C-3 (DESTROYED)
C-4 (DESTROYED)
C-5 (DESTROYED)
C-6 (DESTROYED)
C-7 (DESTROYED)
C-8 (DESTROYED)
7 Venator Star Destroyers
Corellian Fire flagship (DAMAGED)
Home Guard (DESTROYED)
Freedom
Dala’s Fist (DESTROYED)
Retriever
Badgen’s Nobility (SHIELDS AT 68%)
Courscanti Gem (DESTROYED)
2 Legacy Star Destroyers
Kaminoan Maelstrom (SHIELDS AT 99%)
Enraged Aiwha (HANGERBAY DESTROYED)
3 Dreadnaught Heavy Cruisers
Sword of Badgen (DESTROYED)
Shield of Badgen
Republic's Savior
1 Acclamator-class Transport
Warhound (DESTROYED)
2nd Defense Fleet:
1 Loronar Huntress-class Pursuit Cruisers
Findsman
2 Thranta War Frigates
Alderaan's Might
Bail Organa (DESTROYED)
1 Corellian Destroyer
Coronet
4 Corellian Support Frigates
Sword of the Republic
Foundation
Courier (DESTROYED)
Agile (CAPTURED)
3 Venator Star Destroyers
Requiem flagship (DESTROYED)
Defender
Expedient (SHIELDS AT 97%)
1 Legacy Star Destroyers
Spearhead
5 Victory Star Destroyers
Penetrator (DESTROYED)
Motivator (DESTROYED)
Avian
Divine (SHIELDS AT 81%)
Kuat Star
3 Dreadnaught Heavy Cruisers
God of War (DESTROYED)
Impervious (SHIELDS AT 1%)
Jundland (DAMAGED)
2 Acclamator-class Transports
Pride Of The Rim
Glory
4 Acclamator II-class Assault Ships
Wookiee Rage
Pounder
Protector (SHIELDS AT 43%)
Blinding Fury
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 27, 2005 15:17:44 GMT -5
ooc: I hope he's okay. ooc: Because I do not like giving names to vessels that aren't going to be around for long, I'm just going to give a designation to the new ships. It was very, Very, VERY difficult for me just to name the previous ones. Sorry, but it's not fun for me to name all those ships. Reinforcement Fleet 4 Punwickna Geonosian Frigates PF-1 (Shields at 75%) PF-2 (Destroyed) PF-3 (Shields at 50%) PF-4 (Destroyed) 1 Pinnance Geonosian Dreadnaught PD-1 1 Techno Union Carrier TUC-1 (Main Weapon Gone) 10 Commerce Guild Support Ships CG-1 (Shields at 75%) CG-2 (Damaged) CG-3 (Shields at 25%) CG-4 (Shields at 75%) CG-5 (Damaged) CG-6 (Shields at 25%) CG-7 (Shields at 75%) CG-8 (Shields at 25%) CG-9 (Destroyed) CG-10 (Destroyed) 12 Intergalactic Banking Clan Frigates BC-1 (Shields at 50%) BC-2 (Damaged) BC-3 BC-4 (Shields at 75%) BC-5 (Destroyed) BC-6 (Destroyed) BC-7 BC-8 (Destroyed) BC-9 (Shields at 50%) BC-10 BC-11 (Destroyed) BC-12 Let me know if I should alter the number of ships I have, as I tried to balance them with what you have now. ooc: Updated to show battle damage. Altessa: "How goes the battle?" Comm. Officer: "We've destroyed an enemy dreadnaught cruiser, but two of our ships were damaged in the explosion." |
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 28, 2005 8:31:10 GMT -5
Aboard the Loronar Huntress-class Pursuit Cruiser Fury, the engine room fire reaches the reactor and the ship erupts in a massive fireball. The blast rips away the front of the Fury, leaving some survivors. As all the escape pods of the fore section of the dieing vessel launch, what is left of the cruiser rams into a Punwickna Geonosian Frigate.
Tactical Officer Rost: Captain, we've lost the God of War, the Courier and the Fury has just been lost. Survivors of the Fury are being picked up as we speak.
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 28, 2005 16:40:31 GMT -5
The Punwickna Frigate is damaged from being rammed.
The fleets continue to open heavy fire upon one another.
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 28, 2005 17:15:56 GMT -5
The Thranta War Frigate Bail Organa is cut in half by the main weapon of the Techno Union Carrier TUC-1. Throught the damaged area, dozens of lifeless or dieing bodys float into the vacuum of space.
Galnor can only watch these events unfolding before him.
Captain Galnor: By the Force... they have a 'ship killer' with them. Comm, patch me through to the fleet!
Comm. officer: Aye, Sir!
Captain Galnor: This is Captain Galnor to the rest of the fleet. The enemy has a Techno Union Carrier with em. It's already claimed the Bail Organa, keep out of range of it's main weapon! *another nearby Republic warship is ripped apart by the TUC-1* Blast! What ship was that?
Tactical officer Rost: The Warhound... they took the hit for us. Techno Union Carrier is recharging its main gun.
Captain Galnor: Get us out of range!
Helm officer: Aye!
The Corellian Fire is just within range as the ray from the super weapon fires, clipping the cruiser's aft section, destroying the port side engines. The damaged vessel limps out of range as the fighting continues. The blast destroyed the shield generator for the port side hanger bay in which Horkon and Zul are at. Zul is pulled off her feet and is almost sucked into space as the emergency doors shut and the bay repressurises.
Zul: *cough* What... *cough* happened?
Horkon: We've... we've been hit. We need to get to the bridge.
The Jedi couple runs to the command deck as emergency crews run all around them. The Jedi emerge on the bridge.
Horkon: What's going on Captain?
Captain Galnor: We have a ship killer on the loss! Took out two ships before hitting us...
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 28, 2005 17:46:47 GMT -5
ooc:  I totally forgot that the carrier had that weapon! Sorry if I brought too much firepower with me; I'll have some of my ships damaged/destroyed in battle. |
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 28, 2005 17:59:28 GMT -5
ooc: that is alright.
ic:
The Victory Star Destroyer Penetrator rips away at two Intergalactic Banking Clan Frigates with all it's guns until the two enemy ships are officially out of the fight.
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 28, 2005 18:06:38 GMT -5
Altessa: "So, they're leaving the range of the TUC-1. Excellent. We seem to have inflicted great psychological damage upon them."
Comm. Officer: "Shall the TUC-1 get back into range?"
Altessa: "No, keep it near us, and order the first fleet to guard it. They're probably already thinking of ways to destroy it, so we must keep it defended. But have it fire at any ship that does get within range again."
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 28, 2005 18:20:44 GMT -5
The Victory Star Destroyers Penetrator and Motivator move in on the TUC-1 as the Venator Star Destroyer Dala’s Fist draws the enemy ships fire in a decoy action. The two VSDs are intending to ram the main weapon of the TUC-1 as it prepares to fire on the Dala’s Fist.
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 28, 2005 18:32:28 GMT -5
The PD-1 and the ships protecting the TUC-1 open fire on the two approaching star destroyers.
ooc: Hmm, this is going to be interesting.
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 28, 2005 18:39:55 GMT -5
The Victory Star Destroyer Penetrator is severally damaged, exposing most decks to space. Droids start to swarm the surface of the disabled vessel. The Motivator's front is ripped away as a Punwickna Geonosian Frigate makes a kamakazi run. The remaining portion of the dieing warship is almost in ramming range of the TUC-1. As a last ditch effort, the surviving crew of the Penetrator sets the ship to self destruct.
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 28, 2005 18:44:59 GMT -5
The Dala's Fist would be the last ship that the TUC-1 claims as a casualty; the Penetrator's suicide run damages the TUC-1's superlaser weapon, rendering it inopperable.
Altessa: "If I had known we would cause that much damage with it, I would have brought another!"
ooc: That's just Altessa speaking in character. One was enough for me to use; perhaps even a bit too much.
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 28, 2005 19:02:01 GMT -5
ooc:
maybe you could use the italics on he thoughts so it is different then if she was saying it. Like I did in my latest fan-fiction.
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The Dreadnaught Heavy Cruiser Sword of Badgen losses control and burns up in Badgek's atmosphere, the remains crash into one of the planet's lakes.
Tactical officer Rost: Sir, the Sword of Badgen just burned up. Several escape pods are landing on the surface of the planet, by the remaining ones are being destroyed by droid starfighters.
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 28, 2005 19:09:34 GMT -5
ooc: Wait just a minute! Altessa isn't a cold blooded killer; she wouldn't have escape pods targeted for destruction. She might be evil, but she's Aberrant evil.
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 28, 2005 19:13:07 GMT -5
ooc; what if it was the CO of another ship that ordered the attack. They would have to face the wrath of Altessa for giving the order without asking.
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 28, 2005 19:18:05 GMT -5
ooc: Sounds like a plan.
Altessa: What the ...I didn't give orders to fire upon escape pods! Who's the captain aboard that ship?! I demand that he be brought to me once the battle is done so that he may be punished for this dishonorable act!
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Post by Marcus Starkiller on Aug 28, 2005 19:26:45 GMT -5
ooc: sounds good. so, could you figure out who is responsible, you know, add to the story, as in who they are, what their ship is, and what will happen when they are brought before Altessa?
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The Corellian Support Frigate Agile gets afew shots off at the PD-1 before being disabled by a ion blast and is captured. The crew is placed under arrest and the commander demands to see the person in charge of the fleet. Commander Trai's arms are placed behind him and are cuffed. He is escorted aboard a shuttle by several droids and the shuttle takes off for the PD-1.
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Post by cyberpaladin85 on Aug 28, 2005 19:39:15 GMT -5
ooc: Sure, I can do that.
Comm Officer: I believe the one you are refering to is captain Miz'rble aboard the BC-3
Altessa: What he has done is nothing less than murder in my eyes, murder of defensless foes. I shall make sure that he'll stand trial and be executed for this.
Comm Officer: That might be difficult, as he is part of the Intergalactic Banking Clan.
Altessa: That may be the case, but I am sure that he will pay for his crimes.
Comm Officer: By the way, we've captured a enemy ship. The crew is being brought to us as we speak, and the captain demands to see you.
Altessa: Excellent. Bring this captain to me immediately.
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I totally forgot that the carrier had that weapon! Sorry if I brought too much firepower with me; I'll have some of my ships damaged/destroyed in battle.